It has been an arduous journey
from
laziness to restlessness
and
from restlessness to briskness
from
cowardice to brutality
and
from brutality to bravery
from
stupidity to cunning
and
from cunning to intelligence
from
lust to love
and
from love to devotion
from
ignorance to knowledge
and
from knowledge to innocence
from
chaos to music
and
from music to silence
from
sorrow to happiness
and
from happiness to peace
Now that the journey is complete
It is time to rejoice
And rejoicing is
Starting a new journey
Hi Ramesh :)
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing. Simple but very powerful words pregnant with deep meaning. Your creativity is absolutely first class.
The photo is stunning.
Many thanks for sharing.
Have a great day full of joy and happiness :)
Awesome poem 'na. Yea.. It's pregnant with meaning.
ReplyDeleteWishes for your new journey! :)
A good one. It's time to start a new journey.All the best to you. Take care, Shri. God Bless. Will be back after Christmas.
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ReplyDeleteHi Sir, Thanks for your visit and appreciation. It is my pleasure, sharing my poems with you.
#Thanks Mani. There is no my journey. It will be our journey.
#Hi Venus, Thank you very much. Happy Christmas preparations.Have a wonderful celebration.
hi
ReplyDeletevery nice and simple poem but very thoughtful.you express your thoughts very beautifully though your poems.of course your poems are meaningful too.
good luck
Hi Susan,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your support and encouragement.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ramesh,
ReplyDeleteTruly a novel thought well presented.The only suggestion I wish to make is that Your saying "From Knowledge to Innocense"would read better if replaced by "From Knowledge to Wisdom"What do you say?
Incidentally I am still awaiting your feed back on my poem WHO AM I which I wrote sometime back under my blog---poemsbybaiyu.blogspot.com
I am keen to receive your comments since I find a lot of similarity in our thought process notwithstanding our age difference.My best wishes.Baiyu
Hi Ramesh,
ReplyDeleteTruly a novel thought well presented.The only suggestion I wish to make is that Your saying "From Knowledge to Innocense"would read better if replaced by "From Knowledge to Wisdom"What do you say?
Incidentally I am still awaiting your feed back on my poem WHO AM I which I wrote sometime back under my blog---poemsbybaiyu.blogspot.com
I am keen to receive your comments since I find a lot of similarity in our thought process notwithstanding our age difference.My best wishes.Baiyu
Hi Ramesh,
ReplyDeleteTruly a novel thought well presented.The only suggestion I wish to make is that Your saying "From Knowledge to Innocense"would read better if replaced by "From Knowledge to Wisdom"What do you say?
Incidentally I am still awaiting your feed back on my poem WHO AM I which I wrote sometime back under my blog---poemsbybaiyu.blogspot.com
I am keen to receive your comments since I find a lot of similarity in our thought process notwithstanding our age difference.My best wishes.Baiyu
#Baiyu.
ReplyDeleteHello Sir,
Thanks for your visit and comment.Your suggestion is thoughtful. It made me think why I used Innocence instead of Wisdom, though I considered both the words while writing the poem.
I started to write my explanation and felt it would be better as a complete post. .
So my next post will be the answer to your question :)
Once again thanks for making this suggestion.
Have a great week end.
Hi Shri, HAPPY NEW YEAR specially to you and loved ones.
ReplyDeleteMay God showers you with love, happiness and good health
Take good care. Hugs!
Great article Thank
ReplyDeleteyou so much!
Thanks :)
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